Bubblegum Crisis: Menial [Fan Comic]

I want to like “Bubblegum Crisis: Menial” I really do, from what I’ve seen the artist has gotten the art style of Bubble Gum Crisis: Tokyo 2040 down pat, the thing is… It’s a bit rubbish… Don’t get me wrong the Art work is as I said very authentic, it’s just the story telling and the dialogue which are lacking, really lacking… Also for some reason despite this being supposedly set in America they seem to have forgotten to make any of the characters look western… You can check it out if you like Bubblegum Crisis as there are only a handful of pages of it. Hope it gets better because I need a Bubblegum Crisis fix and so far this isn’t it.